You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
* explain why you are writing
* express concern about the missing card
* ask them what they intend to do
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the missing visa credit card from the envelope that I received from the bank yesterday. The bank has asked me to send back an acknowledgement that I have received the card, but there was no card inside the envelope. I am unsure about how can the card go missing from the envelope.
Let me explain the situation. When the courier boy delivered the envelope to my house, I took the delivery myself as I was on leave yesterday. He gave me the envelope, took my signature on the delivery list and then left. Immediately after closing the door, I opened the envelope and to my surprise there was no card inside it. I remember that the envelope seal was not hampered in any way before I opened it. I am unsure whether this is a bank’s mistake for forgetting to put the card inside the envelope or was there a card theft in transit. Since the card is a chip card and does not need a PIN for any transaction below Rs. 10,000, I am very concerned about its misuse. I have still not received any messages about the card, so I am unsure if mobile notifications are activated for this card.
I ask you to look into this matter urgently and first find whether there was even a card in the envelope in the first place. If the bank missed to put the card, then it is very disappointing for a prestigious bank like yours to do such mistakes. But if it is lost or stolen in transit, then I ask the bank to block all the transactions on this card and deactivate it. Also, please send me a new card as soon as possible.
Thank you for your consideration.
Thanks & Regards,
Deepti
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'missed putting'.
Suggestion: missed putting
...nvelope in the first place. If the bank missed to put the card, then it is very disappointing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57971330195 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493421052632 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7419820927 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334604710811 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111470483555 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814209620137 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237224512937 0.12726935374 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792223783901 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.