Some people claim that government should take action to ensure people have a healthy lifestyle. Others however disagree that people should decide them selves which way they prefer to live their life. To what extent you agree and suggest your opinions.
Awareness towards health is spreading across youth as viral message. I agree that government shows more interest today. Individual are more inclined them self about their fitness. This essay would describe both opinions.
Firstly, local people in Chennai are proud to see maintenance of park and fitness equipment which are absolutely no cost. Moreover, it's available along with children's park. So women can sweat out doing exercise at ease with those play equipment. Further there is milk stalls which offer healthy snacks and beverages.
Additionally it's designed like slide, seesaw, so there is no necessity to learn about them. Another major gift from government is park with waterfalls and music. Thus allows people to walk around the park in a delighted way.
On the other hand, it is responsibility of people to heavily use those parks in early morning with care. So that it is not broken. Although, people are paying Rs 5000 for doing work out in gym on their own with no guidance. Why don't we think about the free usage in leisure area. Significantly, people drink healthy drinks quite often after sweating out, they are available outside parks or in nearby hotels. Additionally, women have calcium or vitamin supplement which are readily available and mixed with hot milk or water. Hence,this would safeguard physical fitness.
In conclusion, it is prime focus to avail the benefits and bring physical fitness awareness in our family and friends. As current job is idle without making sweat, we should spend most of morning and evening in these areas made by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are milk stalls'?
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...ease with those play equipment. Further there is milk stalls which offer healthy snacks and beverage...
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Suggestion: Additionally,
... offer healthy snacks and beverages. Additionally its designed like slide, seesaw, so the...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a delighted way" with adverb for "delighted"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s allows people to walk around the park in a delighted way. On the other hand, it is responsibi...
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...those parks in early morning with care. So that it is not broken. Although, people are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55244111025 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684615384615 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8082375348 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170289799641 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433990811658 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407621984406 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829398533505 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348881175636 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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