Nowadays, in most countries, there are numerous television channels to choose from and those include non-stop broadcasting of sport.
Therefore it would appear that many people must be interested in watching sport through out the day and night. However, it does not necessarily follow that watching sport makes people less keen on participating in it. Teachers and parents may be concerned when they see teenagers spending time watching sport on television and fear that they are not active enough. While there are some justification for this, it is also true that young people are often under pressure, for example to do well in exams. They need to relax and give their minds and bodies a break.
In my experience, the young do not tend to watch sport rather than to participating it. The teenagers in my neighborhood regularly play football after school and at weekends. They play in matches or go to the tennis courts or the swimming pools. As well as this they all support various famous clubs and admire sports stars. These starts are their role models and watching them on television encourages participation in sporting activities in spite of the fact that the young try to emulate the people they admire.
By contrast, I have observed that some older people spend their evening and weekend in front of the television following sports such as international golf or motor racing. Moreover, many of these are middle aged men who spend their days sitting at a desk in an office and who get very little exercise in spite of the fact that they need it more than most.
In conclusion, although I accept that there are some people who may be discouraged from participating in sport because they can watch it on television instead in my view. This does not generally apply to the young.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ude non-stop broadcasting of sport. Therefore it would appear that many people must b...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...le must be interested in watching sport through out the day and night. However, it does not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87581699346 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62496223953 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6963893541 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212946962665 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775800288684 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480972293616 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130186532686 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056495411638 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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