In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
It is easy to see that there are many sports channels debating themselves in providing live telecast of Cricket match or football match. This would not only increase their rating but they would benefit from advertisement profit. However, young people watching cricket matches spend their leisure time almost full day. Their interest has been pushed to TV instead of actively playing in the ground.
Most importantly, Teenagers opt for a break from their daily chores of studies and assimilate their knowledge on browsing the internet or chatting with a friend or fully occupied with the TV on those days of cricket matches. Therefore, it would appear that parents are upset about this rational behavior, hence they force their children to participate in play grounds instead of setting hours in front of TV box. In spite of the fact that commercials form the major revenue to the channels and they hypnotize people to watch the entire match, Teenagers fall into prey of their hands and waste their precious time. This affects their future physically by health and mentally by deviating from academics. Also, for school students who are having an annual exam, 24/7 cricket shows can divert them from their studies. Instead, they receive cricket updates every second in mobile apps, so youth can make use of these updates and acknowledge themselves in revising for exams.
Parents face issues in combating the distraction of students. Children are prone to lack of concentration and forget things easily. This also affects their awareness and leads to passive mind. Moreover, it leads to poor focus and attention. this makes them to lose their confidence and are depressed if not allowed to watch TV.
By contrast, Youth plans their activities of a few hours watching TV and rest of day in participating in cricket matches after their school or on weekends. Further, teenagers are more inspired by their sports star. As well as that, they are forming groups in their area and emulate themselves in place of a sports star. Moreover, watching TV has provided them with details of nuances of cricket bowling and batting without actually traveling to Cricket stadium. Additionally, they simulate the stars who specialize in a particular area and try to bring out those ideas in their play in the ground. Those people who are actually boon to full day telecast are middle-aged because they spend most of their time in office in desks and require a break in their weekends. They never realize that it spoils their health even brings heart stroke.
In conclusion, Teenagers planning is essential in course of watching TV or browsing live telecast shows or playing practically in the playground. This enforces their time management skill thereby helping their future. Responsibility lies in parents to ensure their kids are diverted for few hours from TV. Parents discourage TV by supervising kids to revise study notes for their exam in near future. They can inform children to watch re-telecast of same shows during their holidays. Due to their keen interest, Children disagree,disobey and watch shows instead of studies. But, if Parents explain the importance of the exam and their career, Children can concentrate more on studies and plan for shows for an hour in the evening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2742.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 539.0 315.596192385 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08719851577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59404898794 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504638218924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8784777491 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5517241379 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5862068966 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65517241379 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0697968551714 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02654008132 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298284674299 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547345229082 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262642615057 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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