Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

Essay topics:

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

The authorities can take special rules regarding the recycling process. Many people think most of household waste is not being recycled and it is the government responsibility to take legal action towards the recycling process. I partially agree to this statement and explain my reasons in the following passage.

On one hand, people should be thought with usage of recycling process. Indeed, they should be explained about the causes of environmental pollution due to wide range of household wastes. Accordingly, the government should teach them how it helps to society and individuals. For example, schools should include process of waste management, reproduction and recycling process in their curriculum along with the educational courses. Also, must conduct practical exams which encourages them to keep these techniques in to practice. However, this helps to keep our surroundings neat and clean.

On the other hand, the legislation should produce various laws to educate people about waste management. At the same time, people must be instructed to separate their waste into different bins like plastic, paper and spoiled vegetables. Actually, this help to reduce the effort of biodegrading things. Consequently, proper action must be taken on individuals who do not follow this law. For example, who don't follow these rules must be punished with penalty or even must be prisoned if it is done for more times.

After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that it is not only the government responsibility to manage the waste and doing recycling process also, people must learn the benefits of recycling and keep it daily process to reduce the pollution and health hazards.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, consequently, finally, however, if, regarding, so, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3663003663 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8427362909 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3354306745 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25138575869 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823769519678 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850254288283 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16974544055 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459274086087 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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