Some people claim that using tobacco has brought several social problems and smoking should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tobacco smoking is an accepted norm during leisure activities and until recently it was widely consumed by people of all ages. However, recent studies have proved that smoking can cause not only sever health problems but also lead to many uncomfortable situations in a social context. In this essay, I will like to highlight two major reasons why I stongly believe smoking should not be allowed in public gatherings.
The Predomenent cause for not allowing this kind of behaviour has to do with the possibility of involuntory inhaling the tobacco smoke which is being consumed by someone else in that premisis. Passive smoking in a common occurance during group events where non-smokers has to be around smokers who do not maintain social distance or cosider other people’s safetly. At social gatherings such as a dinner party, for instance, the chances of people smoking around others and causing them distress is very high. Furthermore, some smokers don’t have a decency to avoid lighting up a ciggerette infront of children or older family members who it might harm severly.
Another strong motivation to ristrict this usage around others is that it is an expensive addiction and can lead to insufficient funds for running the house and handling the family’s expenses. This habbit is a long lasting one that can burn a hole in your pocket and may land you in a the financial burden. Only in America, an average citizen purchases tobacco up upto $1,500 per month because of his way of life. This high sum of money can to better utilised for supporting the family or can be donated to a charity. Why not use the money to save lives instead of throwing it down the drain.
In Conclusion, there are a high number health issues associated with smoking and for that matter even with passive smoking. So in my view, tobacoo consumption should be restricted to only designated smoking areas and people who do not adhear to this should pay a heafty fine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pporting the family or can be donated to a charity. Why not use the money to save...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86826347305 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61381875383 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607784431138 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2707661101 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228780767164 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717668872301 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494492902027 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136728045338 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520149179169 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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