Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been argued for quite a long period of time whether the art is considered to be an integral part of our lives or not. Although some people think that it is important, others believe it is not that important. I strongly believe the art plays a vital role in our lives and culture, so it is really important. In this essay, I will explain further my opinion with some specific reasons by providing meaningful and relevant examples.
In my opinion, the art has been an integral part of our ancestors and our parents. Because of the importance of art, people follow many ritual things which are helping people widely in their day to day lives. Nevertheless, I also believe that the art and craft could help us in maintaining some great between different religions.
I think the art has powerful impact on our lives. Primarily, it helps society and people to maintain a strong relationship, which could be effective for a peaceful community. The art prvides many ancient thoughts, which are useful for the mental health. Secondly, the art and craft plays an important role when doing cultural activities, such as festival decoration, creating cultural paintings, and in classical music. Lastly, it is believe to be an essential source of ritual and classical dance performances, which is becoming less popular nowadays. In many religions, for instance, people hardly follow contemporary arts, which is circulated by their ancestors. It is because of the advancement in today's world.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the art has been an important and essential part everyone's life. We should follow our cultural and ritual techniques to succeed further. A piece of art would be great learning for upcoming generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
..., and in classical music. Lastly, it is believe to be an essential source of ritual and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05190311419 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81045977791 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532871972318 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0011719837 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213213408491 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693981888211 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391266309111 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131190837585 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429485690444 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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