Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Some people say that leaving parent's house for a child as soon as he becomes adult is a good idea and they encourage them to do so.While on the other hand others believe the opposite as according to them a child must spend most of his days in their native residence.In this essay I will discuss both the points and give my opinion at the end.
Firstly, leaving parent's house in the early years of adulthood is a tough decision to make for a youngster but it helps them to develop their individual personality as a child gets a chance to live on his own terms.Secondly, as a child is on his own, it becomes mandatory for him to socialise with other's thus social skills are improved within an individual.Furthermore, one learns to take care of his own health whenever there are issues like cough or cold as no parents are there to take care of him which makes a child feel mature and self dependent.
On the other hand, there are others who feel that a child should spend most of his time with parent's and should not leave parent's house early.They say that a child isn't mature enough that he can stay on his own as there are various challenges associated related with it.For instance, parents feel that how their child can study on his own as mostly they had taught him since his childhood age.Moreover, parents have a caring side too as they feel that how their child will manage food and health as they fear their child might not suffer food poisoning by eating non home food.
According to me, a child should leave parent's house as early as possible because undoubtedly ,it will help them in developing skills within them to sustain in this fast paced competitive life which will eventually makes them mature and self dependent in the early ages of life.
In conclusion, when to leave parent's house is a crucial decision for a child so their own opinion is imperative on this hence parents must let their children decide when to leave as it's their life and they have to deal with the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54143646409 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51760384311 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480662983425 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.936041934 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.8 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.4 20.7667163134 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.2 7.06120827912 385% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321399514497 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201671550169 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100271985295 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201671550169 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100271985295 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.0946893788 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.32 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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