Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.Why do you think that is the case?What is the most important thing to succeed in life.

Achievement of success in kife by an individual does not always depend upon his academic qualifications. This has become a matter of discussion among the masses. Fulfillment of desired goals and aim is dependent on various other factors also. This essay will shed some lighy on the variables of success.

To begin with, merely gathering of academic degrees does not ensure the achievement of success in one's life. In this contemporary era, being successful has becime a multi-dimensional approach. People nowadays, by utilizing their brain power in creative manner are reaching the peak of success. Furthermore, acquisition of skills has been gaining paramount importance in today's cut-throat competition. For instance, the great Indian cricketer Sachin Tendulkar is only matriculate in education, but is the most famous name and is often referred to as 'God of Cricket'. With his rigid determination, he has earned a lot of name and fame. His achievements are not attributed to his educational qualifications, in fact they arr the result of his hard earned skills.

There are a plethora of factors which kead to ultimate succesa in one's life. The most pivotal role is played by the strong determination and will power to fulfill the desires aim in the life. With these two most powerful qualities, many of the trivial failures can be overlooked. Consequently, focus in the right direction towards the achievement of goal is maintained. In addition to this, any obstacle in the path can be crossed easily, which will ultimately give success. For learning or perfecting any skill, great determination becomes the key to success.

In the gist of essay, I would conclude thay with strong will power and determination, any individual can take himself to the great heights of the wealth. Education can definitely boost the achievements along with one's ability ro work hard to achieve the goals.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07379478202 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2523855979 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8421052632 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131722041749 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408090033979 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375505024445 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732459331996 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511000016519 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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