Increase in the population lead the accomodation options vary, ranging from houses to bunkhouses. Although there are some people feel better living in a house, In this essay I intend to discuss why the advantages of living in the aparment outweigh the disadvantages in comparison with the house living.
Those who tend to live in a house accomodation present reasonable perspectives. Firstly, Due to the fact that flats are quite close to each other, in contrast to the houses, they are more likely to pass the sound throughout the walls which may be occured in midnights. Moreover, since too many pet fanatics morelikely to look after one, nowadays, there many factory that can annoy neigbours such as, smell, barking, as well as being frightened. For example, even though it is not applied in all apartments, there are some landlords who do not allow pets inside the flat, because they can be annoying for neighbours. Therefore, reasons given above paragraph are sort of indicator for people to decide whether to live in house.
On the other hand, The availability and convinience living in a apartment always appeal to people. First of all, having someone who does your errand, not only leads you to save your precious time but also ones energy. Secondly, interms of calloboration, neighbourhood alway benefited people’s life, people dont fell the loneless. Moreover, security will be provided with majority of co operation and being robbed will be less likely to happen. For example, one of the scientific research reveals most thieves are toward the detached houses because when they are on work they are not heard by others because of houses position.
Having considered both, I have come to believe that living in the apartment always secure people. In addition, it enables people create crucial relationships amongst neighbours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many factories
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Suggestion: an
... availability and convinience living in a apartment always appeal to people. Firs...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ou to save your precious time but also ones energy. Secondly, interms of calloborat...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, sort of, such as, as well as, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77123919333 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643333333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9331343343 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7857142857 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245453607426 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809480147351 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901909325057 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154578200607 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779444855177 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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