Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?
These days shopping centres have become increasingly popular than local markets because of different advantages they offer. Despite its advantages, some people still prefer local markets. This essay will discuss the advantages of each type of marketplace and state my preference for shopping.
On the one hand, many people select shopping malls due to the better environment and variety of shops at a single place. For busy people time-saving is the key factor and they more frequently go to shopping malls than local markets. As shopping malls offer a variety of goods under one roof and ensure better quality rich consumers prefer to buy products from them. Moreover, the environment of shopping malls is way better than that of local markets. Convenient ways of payment methods, such as credit cards, is another great advantage that most shopping malls offer. Since plastic money offers more security and convenient ways of shopping, people prefer to go to a shopping centre where these types of payments are accepted. It is often said that shopping malls are the future of shopping while local markets are the concept of bygone days.
On the other hand, local markets also offer a wide range of advantages and products to people. In fact, the freshness of vegetables and fruits could be a great advantage of local markets why so many people still prefer local markets over shopping centres. At the same time, the price difference is another reason many people think local markets are better places for shopping. It is indeed true that the local market offers a comparatively cheaper price. Therefore, these advantages exemplify the necessity of local market to the people and why people prefer it.
To conclude, shopping centres and local markets both offer different positive experiences to the consumers and both need to be in form because of their different benefits. I personally believe shopping centres produce better shopping experience for me than local markets as I most frequently shop in a shopping mall than in a local market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...markets are the concept of bygone days. On the other hand, local markets also of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13134328358 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54705767202 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2304871436 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.117647059 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439872847755 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167603169408 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715558125869 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301057799073 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507374601042 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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