Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
Some people prefer doing daily routine and not getting out of their comfort zones. However, some other people are change-oriented and accept challenges easily. In my point of view, the second group opinion is more valuable because I believe that embracing change leads to progression and personal growth.
On the one hand, some people believe doing day to day tasks base on a regular routine is an ideal lifestyle. In fact, they believe that anxiety comes from changes and unpredictability of external environment create stress. For instance, low-income workers never want to change their low-paid job because they believe that if they take risks and run their own business they might face a massive failure and lose their current assets as well, besides, they are not faced stressful and anxious circumstances. Thus, these group of people believes that change and uncertainty situation cause stress and worry for them.
On the other hand, another group of people called risk takers and change-oriented people, prefer to face new situations. They considered new situations as the opportunity for growth and progression. In addition, they believe that frequent changes bring flexibility and make people adapted new situation and challenge more easily. For example, entrepreneurs are the type of people who embrace new conditions despite their fear of failure or uncertainty future. Hence, change leads to personal growth and new opportunities.
To conclude, while there are several opinions of both sides, whether taking a risk and accept change or being a committed person to routine tasks, I profoundly believe that being brave and move out of our comfort zones could be beneficial for further growth and adaptation to social changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
... uncertainty situation cause stress and worry for them. On the other hand, another gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35272727273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76993540516 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8045453836 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171306185587 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711603937879 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044669101525 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114566604509 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633959490502 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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