Some people said that with the help of parenting and child development courses parents can improve the life of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Way of living changed, more knowledge and awareness are given for parenting, through campaigns and trainings, by several local and international organizations. Some people agree that these development courses will improve the life of children, others disagree and believe that changes come from home.
Each society has its own way of treating, that’s why some parents need to change and make a progress to develop the kids. First, several people prefer courses, to stay up to date to everything, since each day there is a new thing that might threat on their child. Second, parents need to teach their babies to become a good person, listen to all advices and distinguish between right and false. For example, my sister is taking online courses, to understand how she must treat their kids and how to teach them correctly without affecting on their personality. From my side I agree, where these days everything might harm our kids lives and destroy it.
On the other hand, some parents believe how they were raised they can lift their children, no need for such courses. First, for them child can learn from his/her environment and trainings won’t help. Second, life and their entourage will teach their children, lead them to the correct path. However, such courses for few people is waste of money and time, they can benefit from these by spending it with their kids. For example, when we were babies our parents raised us the way they were taught, they relied on schools and their development studies. In my opinion I disagree, where many things are affecting negatively on society that’s why improving courses is important.
As a conclusion, there is two types of people, some agree to have development courses, others disagree. From my point of view, both can help parents to develop their parenting, but trainings and courses these days will help more, due to changes that is appearing lately, to aid their child to grow up correctly and mentally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...hy some parents need to change and make a progress to develop the kids. First, several peo...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ays will help more, due to changes that is appearing lately, to aid their child to grow up c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52456085069 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9542443734 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257416603412 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910595821488 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765387997025 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176956506705 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518855701206 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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