Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Others, however, believe that people should be free to choose sports activities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sports began since ancient and with time many changes happened to it some sports developed to match with this modern lifestyle, others stopped, and new era of activities appeared. Several people believe there’s a lot of risky sports in many fields should be banned, for many reasons. While other group of people think, it is the individual choice to choose what sports activities he wants to do and practice.
Number of people prefer their children or them to go for a safe sport, to avoid any threat and harm to themselves. First, for them harmful sports such as Kong Fu, Wrestler or ay fight game, might cause a big damage to their body, brain even it led to physical or mental disability. Moreover, some entertainment requires a big budget to invest in such games, especially in motorsports were entering in this sport the person should start paying from his own saving to practice, and have their own trainers, until they reach the level to be a tough competitor, to get the opportunity to attract sponsorship companies. In my opinion, I disagree with such points, where people are free to choose what is the best for them.
On the other hand, choosing dangerous sport or an easy one, each person has the right to do any sports activities they want. Some individuals for them doing hard activities that require strong body building is a big challenge for them to show their skills and abilities, were strength, endurance is needed such as gymnastic or weightlifting. However, many people choose risky sports, they believe such activities attract huge number of followers and fans, where they can benefit by gaining a lot of money from social media, advertisement or sponsors. From my point of view I agree with this statement, that we can choose any sport we think we will succeed in it.
As a conclusion, all sports are changing, and safety of the athletes become a priority these days. But some people think that dangerous sports should be stopped to avoid any health or financial issues. Somehow, others believe each one has the freedom to do any sport he/she find themselves are applicable to achieve and reach the top of this sports. In my opinion, we can choose any game that suits us and know how to avoid any threat to ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big damage'.
Suggestion: big damage
... Wrestler or ay fight game, might cause a big damage to their body, brain even it led to phy...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
... has the freedom to do any sport he/she find themselves are applicable to achieve an...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...licable to achieve and reach the top of this sports. In my opinion, we can choose an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7969151671 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55468019864 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542416452442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2476773328 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364489944705 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13318538309 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865306239336 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239920943994 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569771400422 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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