Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisements plays a crucial role in boosting the market of a commodity. Some section believe that advertisement motivates to shop unwanted items, because others are on the stand that, these marketing strategies help with new products which may enhance quality of life. An attempt is made to discuss both these view before reaching my opinion.
On the one hand, the fate of a product is determined by its advertising methods. To embark up on this, numerous promotions attracts the people to buy goods even though it is not an essential necessity. To clarify, advertisements about newly introduced smartphones with special such as discounts, interest free EMIs attracts customers to upgrade their device by exchanging with advanced one. These strategies makes us to shop unwanted items and increases our expenditure.
On the other hand, advertisements are very useful and informative in purchasing things which improves the standard of living to a great extent. These advertisements detail to the customers in the right direction about the device which makes them to adopt correct decision. To further showcase, recently emerged device called I watch made a lot of impact among the people. The speciality of the watch is that it provides accurate information about health, place and other feature about the person who is wearing it. These information are essential especially for proper monitoring of day-to-day activities and in turn results in a higher quality of life.
In Conclusion, considering the above view, I totally agree and support that, advertisements are is highly influential in selecting products which provides a standard of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...the market of a commodity. Some section believe that advertisement motivates to shop un...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...ing with advanced one. These strategies makes us to shop unwanted items and increases...
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Line 9, column 516, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...ure about the person who is wearing it. These information are essential especially for proper mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41923076923 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0142069914 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6896110397 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241881974885 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762658164679 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535724976654 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135795526125 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193027913542 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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