When it comes to publicity at buying various things, there are disputed opinion regarding to it. Where a group of thinker opine that It is significantly accepted by the consumers when they buy items; while, few claim that it is not a new trend and overlooked nowaday. Both the views have their own arguments. Therefore before commenting on my opinion both the sides are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
Discussing the victory of advertisment toward inclination of people to shopping, the principal one point is that it has taken a noticeable part of budget of majority of the business organisations. By this i mean that in recent time not only small scale industries promote their product throught it, but hundreads of world famous organisations also using it for gives the information to their customers about their efforts. For example, one recent Survey carried out by The Times Of India have concluded that 74% of multinational companies spend 16% to 24.50% of their revenues for prmotion. Moreover the big hoardings, banners, video displays, speakers and social media posts are now ubiqutous unlike very rare in the past few decades. All these signs are clear illustration of success of ads.
On the flip side according to supports of later view, advertisements ignored as it is omnipresent and considered common in this materialistic society. Firstly, the main reason behind this weather some products are now wrong presented or manipulates the mind of buyer. To explain it is also posible to exaggerate products by using ads; hence, majority of litterate people have always mindset that it is worthless and brainwashing approach. For such a purpose it is true that publicity is normal things.
To conclude and give my opinion, it is eventually said that the popularity of advertisement is growing day to day; however, due to unethical attempts of some companies for their products promotion, educated society takes it as unsusual things. But, now every one can identify the attention behind each ads. If pondered, I support the former view to a large extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, i mean, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89346447675 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0742687734 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169833379368 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514115981762 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413990707411 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964246153128 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177348994771 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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