Advertisement have influenced people choice for buying a product extensively. While some people support this opinion, others are of the opine that adverts are so frequent that people give least attention to it. This essay will discuss both sides of argument and provide evidence on why I believe advertisements are no longer persuasive.
Marketing industry uses various strategies to attract customers to their client's product. Many people believe these promotional activities are extremely successful in influencing consumers psychology to purchase a product because people are dependent of the adverts to know about the release of latest products of their favorite brands. For instance, whenever Apple company announce the release of new phone, people run to the store to purchase it first. Apart from this, people are attracted to various promotional offers put up by the advertising companies. This is evident in any super market store. Although government had imposed strict infection control protocols, people rush to super markets to buy products on offer even if this involves breaching the protocol.
However, there are so many adverts popping up in every digital and non-digital platform that people are least bothered to pay attention to it. The main reason is that, as adverts has become the main source of income for social media content makers, every video or webpage has an ad which force the viewers to skip it immediately without watching the full content. This is seen very commonly among people who watch videos in YouTube or Facebook. Other than this, now a days there are so many brands available in the market for the same product that people prefer to go to the shop and randomly picks any one without reviewing much about the product. For example there are hundreds of registered soap brands across the globe and people do not view the adverts for each brand rather they prefer to buy the soap based on its fragrance and medical properties.
In conclusion, many people argue that adverts have extreme influence people's choice to buy a product as it is common to see people waiting for the release of their favorite brand products and runs to store whenever there is a promotional offer. Others argue that people pay less attention to adverts as it is so common. I agree with the latter's point of view as there are so many adverts in digital platform and lots of brands for single product in market which makes the consumers to pick up the product from the shop without going through the advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ple support this opinion, others are of the opine that adverts are so frequent that peopl...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the least'.
Suggestion: give the least
...hat adverts are so frequent that people give least attention to it. This essay will discus...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...f the adverts to know about the release of latest products of their favorite brands. For ...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...n YouTube or Facebook. Other than this, now a days there are so many brands available in t...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...uTube or Facebook. Other than this, now a days there are so many brands available in t...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...er to go to the shop and randomly picks any one without reviewing much about the produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0380952381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5847362879 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3831401609 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.470588235 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262431768598 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101170293218 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787582953478 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194960594729 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090500758507 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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