A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday 2 describe some poss

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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/ She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1.explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
2.describe some possible disadvantages
3. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

Dear Alice,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I received your letter yesterday and I am glad that you asked for my advice on your plan to go for a camping holiday this summer. Although this is your first time, I would definitely recommend you to go ahead with this trip as it is adventurous and full of fun and you will have lots of memories to cherish by the end of the trip.

Since camping involves stay in unfamiliar conditions, you might encounter few problems like using open toilet and you will have to manage your daily activities with limited resources. Hence, make sure you prepare the list of essential items in advance and carry everything required in your backpack.

If I get my holiday approved from office then I will also join you for the trip. In that way, I can also help you to make your trip better as I have been doing camping every summer since past five years and I have all the resources like camping tent, portable cooking stove and so on.

I am looking forward to meeting you and let me know if you require anything for the camping holiday.

With regards,
Sruthy

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50246305419 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28776237442 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4381124134 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360991826883 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150704591261 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129455798012 0.0603063233224 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218697777647 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112141713253 0.0580467560999 193% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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