You study at a university and often use the university library. The library closes very early in the evening and your are not able to stay there and study. Write a letter to the manager of the library. In the letter:
1.Describe who you are and the details of your university course
2.Explain the problem at the library
3.Suggest what you think the manager should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to raise my concern regarding the university library closing time as I am a frequent visitor there.
I am a full-time MBA student at the Hindustan university and I have taken healthcare management as my degree specialization. I have been using the university library since the commencement of the course as the library has enormous collection of study material on healthcare management topic.
Unfortunately, as I have evening practical session in the university hospital as part of our course, I am not able to use these resources effectively as the library closes at 6pm in the evening. Although I had raised this issue to the librarian, I have not received adequate feedback from her.
Hence, I request you to kindly ensure that the timing of the library is rescheduled till midnight; and if required, I can request few of my friends to volunteer as librarian for evening shift. This might be helpful to sort out your concern regarding shortage of staff, which is common in such scenario.
Kindly consider this request and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ms Sruthy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...management as my degree specialization. I have been using the university library ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99487179487 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95544828346 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3791966998 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328362810729 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118866213461 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992900973356 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166541033778 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816105365455 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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