There are two ways to talk about this topic. Some people like this system of education very much. but on the other hand most of people dosen't like this system. in my case i also don't
Like.because it's 90% of learning facts and 10% of practical studies.
I still remember my age of school i asked My science teacher why they are not giving proper Education of practicals.at that time i feel we are like frogs in the well. because we know everything about the well but dosen't know any thing out of the well.
This system of education good for not developing country.because they don't have much resources.but kind of our countries we have everything we need.In this system of education childrens like roberts.they grab everything just for a minit.but they are not real.
I believe one thing we are learning and we do our exams well and sucsesfully complete our degrees or cours studies. But we are not knowledgeable about practical part. Its just teachers teach us the curiculum and we are cram. I believe in deep its not the way to make an educated person.
So everyone can evaluate this and understand there should be a good blance between theory beased education system and practical beased education system. However i propose we need to change this education system and make a good one for our childrens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, well, i feel, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75982532751 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68728955316 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532751091703 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2973651589 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8461538462 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775282146746 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361698030134 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433670565365 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056220386883 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508737157038 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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