Some people say that art subjects such as music, drama and creative writing are an essential part of education, and every school should include them in its syllabus.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Today, arts such as music and writing form the basis of human life. As many contests and celebrations are held annually on these topics. Some say these should be included in student lessons.I will discuss the positive and negative aspects of art in this article.
Art has long played an important role in human life. So it has a lot of positive effects on humans.Firstly, it is polished by the art of the human soul, and the human being is confident in the creation of his works, which makes the human life comfortable.Second, many students do not have the ability to understand scientific concepts. But they can also create a work of art. If art programs are not on the school table, these students are frustrated and cannot imagine a future for themselves.
The world we live in is not only about art, and we need science alongside art. Aside from the advantages I have outlined for art, one can address its disadvantages.Aside from the advantages I have outlined for art, it can also address its disadvantages.When students go to university, they face a variety of scientific issues that they must have had a background in school.So that they can successfully complete science courses at the university.On the other hand, we also need science like calculus in everyday life. All people need to be able to do their daily calculations correctly. And we also have to use science to solve life's problems.Apart from the above, we need the science to discover ourselves and travel to other worlds as well as to cure the various diseases that people are involved in.
In conclusion,I believe that the inclusion art in the curriculum of colleges and schools should be balanced. Science and art are equally applicable to human life.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88513513514 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00835821306 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 111.101851028 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140358467088 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592771113728 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387237313246 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990167750933 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368158233681 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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