Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
To be a prosperous nation or a society, people must be healthy. Although some people believe that government should increase sporting facilities to improve public health, others believe that only sporting facilities will not be enough to improve health of individuals, and other measures needed as well. In my opinion, importance, awareness and benefits must be spread by government in addition to sports facilities to have a healthy community.
Sports play vital role to improve one's health condition. Therefore, facilities like playing ground, infrastructure and equipment must be easily available to an individual so that he/she can practice. For instance, Indian government has launched "Khel India" scheme to enhance sporting infrastructure in the country, as a result hundreds of new stadiums are established. But, are these facilities really utilised to its optimum level? Are people of the society aware of this initiative?
If people of the community knows the benefits of sport by inculcating in their life, then only a society or a nation can expect a healthy society or a nation in future. Government must promote health awareness programs in regular interval via various means such as e-media, newsletters, public announcements etc. To illustrate, these days city marathon and city cycling events are immensely popular in urban areas to make people aware of health. Government has funded many NGOs to spread benefits of sports and information about new facilities installed in the society.
To sum up, to improve health of a society, sports facilities are required. However, if individuals are not aware of merits of exercise and sports in their life, then just establishing state-of-art sport facilities will not help government to have a healthy nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45487364621 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00365783772 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5901547589 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211917877206 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791178536224 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726250716838 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139353314848 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446247997691 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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