Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on increasing the number of sports facilities in improving public health. On my point of view, I think there are myriad amount of factors which would affect on public health other than sporting facilities.
First and foremost, nutritional food affect on public health in a greater manner. For instance people need to take nutrients such as carbohydrates, protein, vitamins and minerals according to a schedule prescribed by nutritionists. The amount of calories need for a specific person depends on the BMI Index together with their past health records and family health condition as well.
Secondly, religion can also be used in stimulating mental health of the population. For example, in Sri Lanka the culture is based on Buddhism philosophy, therefore it helps to relax and rejuvenate minds of their population which is an important factor in improving public health. In addition, the availability of sophisticated and upgraded medical facilities would also result in quality life style together with increased life expectancy and high level of immunity level too.
Finally, the enviromental pollution could also effect on public health of their citizens and it is evidents that, people who live in pollutesd areas are more exposed on several infection thatn the people who live in countryside. As an example, during the month of November, there is a greater possibility of resperarational problems among Indians due to air pollution caused by smke of lighting crackers and burning hay. Therefore, the public themselves ought to convert into sustainable energy sources to mitigate the infections related to air pollution.
On the other hand, increased sporting facilities would not give the desired results, unless there is proper guidance and awareness on the importance of physical fitness to encourage and persuade people on physical activities. Governments, can include physical fitness subject to thee national curriclum to encourage the younger generation for regular exercises.
In conclusion, it is recommended to consider all the factors with equal significance to overcome this severe issue from the society. In nutshell, the expenditure on health facilities might incurr to greater portion on the national budget which could either be used for another worthy cause. To sum up human being has not been able to find a sustainable solution for this hazard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43832020997 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92056527129 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57217847769 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8364650006 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247981725963 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793828893923 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759377990601 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131100747955 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981335024863 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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