Some people say that communication between family members is less now as compared to past. Do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, family is of paramount significance in every individual’s life. It is often argued that there is a paradigm shift in the communication level among family members in contemporary era as compared to bygone era. However, I partially agree to the given notion.
Apparently, various factors can be observed which has substantially contributed in reduced communication among family and have reasons to substantiate it. To begin with, the working schedules of individuals have significantly impacted the work life balance. Subsequently, they have less time to devote to their beloved ones. Although, people do talk with their family members, they lack spending quality time in family. Henceforth, family confronts the potential problem of weak bonds. According to BBC, 70% of working people have less time to spend with the family. Apart from this, the advent of modern technology has reduced the human interaction. Conspicuously, people are extremely interested in socializing online rather than sharing their feelings with family. To vindicate, children like to spend a lion's share of time on Facebook and Instagram instead with family.
On the other hand, in this modern epoch, communication has prolifically increased among family members for myriad reasons. Chiefly, is modern technology helpful in escalating communication? Certainly yes! People who are far away from their families are reaping the benefit by being in touch through these communication mediums. To corroborate, the advanced feature of video calling have made easier for people to be in touch with their family. Besides this, bygone are the days, when children used to hesitate to share anything with their parents. In this contemporary era, even though parents are busy in working, the freedom of sharing among children has increased the communication among family members.
Suffice to say, the world has witnessed numerous of changes from the past decade being decreased communication among family the most prominent. Nevertheless, in my contention the family communication has reduced because of hectic work life and usage of mobile phones more. Although, work is important to earn bread and butter, a balance should be maintained for a smooth family life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98989968143 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56231884058 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0354928116 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210007102388 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620767419882 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446415652153 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134530029551 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228613197941 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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