Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology is growing by leaps and bounds at present and it has been helping us making our life easier. There is no doubt that new inventions has completely replaced an enormous number of traditional things. However, there are few things which cannot be vanished no matter how many new technologies are developed.
Traditional Newspaper and Magazines are one such examples. I shall be arguing in favor of aforesaid while shading some light of my disagreement of the fact that technology might replace the paper books and newspapers.
To begin with, People nowadays has been extremely advanced as the new technologies has helped them grow. In the fast paced current lives, people tend to have less time but they want themselves to be updated with the news as to what is happening around the world and with the help of technology like Smart Phones, one can simply have all the details and information about the world.
On the contrary, There is still a huge crowd who prefer to read news by the traditional newspaper or Magazines. Starting a day with reading a newspaper, knowing what is happening around the globe while enjoying a cup of tea or coffee has become an ardent habit of many.
In addition to this, Traditional newspaper and magazines are affordable for every group of society since it is cheaper as one doesn't have to spent thousands to buy a newspaper. On the other hand buying a smart phone or a tablet will cost more than thousands and if one wants to buy latest updated gadgets, it might cost even in lakhs.
The other perks are, It is convenient and available at almost every place whereas technology is reachable to a certain group of people and places.
To conclude, This is the truth that technology has grown to such an extent that human race is completely relying on it however, things like Newspaper and Magazines are holding a strong place in the lives of many that it might take something more than the modern technology to completely replace them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
...s at present and it has been helping us making our life easier. There is no doubt that...
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Line 15, column 120, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ry group of society since it is cheaper as one doesnt have to spent thousands to b...
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Line 15, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...p of society since it is cheaper as one doesnt have to spent thousands to buy a newspa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, whereas, while, as to, in addition, no doubt, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8567251462 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6201392027 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6637770577 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.769230769 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207764415566 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692987317362 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351886653407 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926526638223 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405118868229 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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