Some people say that international sporting events contribute greatly to peace and stability in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In todays world of crime and terrorism, events like international sports will help to bring the countries in harmony and spread the message of peace and love among the countries. The advantages the countries will have will be discussed further in this essay.
To embark on, sports played at an international level among the countries will help in building a healthy competition among them. They will play with each other with a positive spirit. This helps to build a feeling of brotherhood among the people of different countries. For example, India and Pakistan though have a lot of tension at the borders, but the friendly cricket match between them helps in bringing peace and harmony as well as it serves as a binding factor with in them.
Moreover, international sporting events helps to bring all the countries together playing for the fame of their respective countries. For example, events like Olympic games, commonwealth games help to bring sportsmen of various countries and contribute to the popularity of their country. For example, people from places like west indies which is hardly to locate when represent their countries on international events helps in the global recognition of their countries. It also generates a feeling of patriotism among citizens when they win the gold medal for their country, their national anthem is played and their country flag is hoisted. Everyone gives a standing ovation to that country.
To conclude, I completely agree with the opinion that Sports played at International level helps in easing tensions between countries and helps to spread the message of tolerance, peace, and brotherhood.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23396226415 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76129996576 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505660377358 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3742177466 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120332957642 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531263086139 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353553685222 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785703234481 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119955445667 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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