Some people say that international sporting events contribute greatly to peace and stability in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The importance of international level sporting, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. I completely agree that international events of sports do not only bring peace between the countries but it also helps to reduce the overall stress on society and bring smile on their faces.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why worldwide sporting events are crucial to bring an stability in the world, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it brings two or more different nations closer. people get more chances to know each other and learn their culture and values. For instance, last Fifa worldcup brought too many countries on a single platform and people in Brazil accept them with an open warm heart and defeated the norm racism. Therefore, it is indispensable to organise more events around the globe to bring more and more prosperity in the world.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that it is the most effective way of releasing tension between countries. We are living in a globalised world, where everyone is working like a machine, not only the individual stress has gone high but also the tension between countries has rised significantly, and indeed, sports seem to be the only way to come over on these issues. For example, pakistan was left alone at international forum, but international cricket in pakistan not only made the nation happy but it also opened the door of pakistan for the people around the world for tourism and research purposes.
To put into a nutshell, it won't be wrong to say that international sporting is the most salient way to connect with the world either in monitory or political terms. Moreover, the way it provide people a relief of stress and make a society healthy as a whole, should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95098039216 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72691809119 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5786985772 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.727272727 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170497088919 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059733127447 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414763551476 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983560681643 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137959015589 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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