It is often observed, that clean home and workplace is essential with help of place things on right space. Although some times we could not able to maintain tidiness yet it is always provides a positive waves to do any work effectively. In this essay up sides of tidness and organised places will be discussed.
Maintaing any place with proper organisition always look good, provide positive waves to do work. If our home or office would be messy all time, it will be raised our stress level, hence it reflects on our mood. For Instance, whenever at night i leave dishes unwashed and look them in the morning, it always give stress and make a lot of pressure. However, a clean work counter always provide extra energy to do task quickly.
Phenomanon lots of human trust cleaning work spot always wastage of time, time could be use in another better way. Firstly, after taking time wasting approach, make work station messy and could not able to find right thing at needed. Secondly, it always present you are really busy cannot maintain your work than how could handle yourself with your own thoughts. To illustrate, a research by Queen University, London most of the famous personalities keep their all work task done and organised, whereas they could able to focus. Last but not the least, a tidy envirnment pass pleasure to create the mood to do work effectively.
To conclude, a tidy and organised place of work, always provide waves to do work effective and smooth style, provide pleasure rather than frustration.
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Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84674329502 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47781068853 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4211857786 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113907272839 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448030783865 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559979251919 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749569336798 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423354182073 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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