Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
It is inevitable for some to keep a sorted office and living space by properly placing and storing things. In my opinion, managing the layout and adequately allocating space for all the household items and work equipment, is of utmost importance. In the following paragraphs, it will be discussed how a clean setup of the surroundings results in increased efficiency and creates a positive environment to live and work.
It is often believed that neatness of your bedroom and workspace is directly related to the efficiency of your actions. In other words, a systematic house and a well-settled office desk can reduce the amount of time taken to carry out a particular task as there would be less or no time wastage caused by searching the daily use objects. For example, people usually search for their television remote, and as a result, they miss live broadcasts. According to a research, people who get up and make their bed are often believed to do well in their careers, therefore inculcating a habit to keep everything in the designated place will lead us to do our personal chores and official tasks faster.
Moreover, it is observed that a hassle-free arrangement of objects creates a positive surrounding, which is a relaxing feeling. The place we live in, if handled properly can create positive vibes which can consequently uplift our mood, furthermore, a clean desk at job invites new ideas. For illustration, I was mesmerized by the appearance of my room after it got re-organized by my mother while I was out for a vacation. Finally, it is a great idea to keep things in a sorted way.
To conclude, I strongly recommend that it is necessary to properly organize the place we stay and perform the job at. Who does not like a positive environment? Personally speaking, sorting surroundings is undoubtedly the first and the most significant step we can take to make our mood more positive and work efficiently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a sorted way" with adverb for "sorted"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90825688073 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98549270317 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7756127972 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104849586823 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359212378459 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526908788027 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550927717348 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420727645937 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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