Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad, staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own experience and include relevant examples.
Majority of people prefer international travel for vacations, they relish local attractions and comfortable hotels. In my opinion, trip to different countries is exciting, also it is the best way to take a break from usual routine. In this essay, exploring different geography and learning about new cultures will be discussed as the main reasons for choosing an abroad trip.
Firstly, an international excursion gives an opportunity for exploring unseen locations. No matter how beautiful a person's native might be, travel to different country is always exciting as there is a good chance of experiencing locations, which you have only dreamt about. For instance, when I visited Malaysia with my colleagues, I enjoyed the beach view hotel for the first time which is not available in my landlocked country. Furthermore, seeing modern transportations and skyscrapers for the first time, thrilled me. Therefore, visiting a new country can greatly satisfy one's wanderlust.
Secondly, learning about new culture and demography is also a perk on international vacation. Local markets and monuments are a great insight to a culture different than yours. For example, I enjoyed local cuisine and traditional dance shows in Malaysia and visit to temples enlightened my spirit. Additionally, getting a chance to communicate and socialize with the local people helped me make new friends.
To conclude, taking vacation to a different country and spending time at great hotels combined with local attraction visits, can multiply the joy of your holidays. In other words, learning about new culture, people and different geography is such a pleasurable feeling to experience during break from day to day life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... a great insight to a culture different than yours. For example, I enjoyed local cui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01026190692 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3463579996 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133552575854 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442092767675 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369757106446 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866429008991 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284351967619 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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