Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub continental countries What do you think are the reasons behind this

Essay topics:

Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries.
What do you think are the reasons behind this?

In the sub-continent nations, national games are less famous when compared to cricket. Once introduced by the britishers, cricket has become the most played and followed sport. I opine that, the primary reasons for its widespread are the financial attractiveness and the inspiration from the pioneers of this sport. Consequently, it is comparitively attractive than a country's own national sport.

To begin with, the amount of money a person can earn is reasoned to be the most impactful consideration when chosing cricket as a career. In other words, sound financial health is a priority for all of the aspiring youth, as it secures the future and takes care of the daily expenses, therefore resulting in a comfortable life. An interesting example of this is, famous batsmen Virat Kohli who is also a synonym for youth icon in India, is Asia's wealthiest sportsperson according to the Forbes magazine because of his earnings via the game and also the brand endorsments, advertisements he does. It goes without saying that popularity of the sport is definitely due to the economic benefit it generates.

Another point to consider is that aspiring players are usually inpired by some legends of the game. To elaborate, successful batsmen and bowlers become idols for people, which in turn converts them either into a fan or a prospective player. To illustrate, Sachin Tendulkar a former player of Indian cricket team is worshiped by some, moreover, it is unbelievable that he also has a temple and a museum dedicated to him. Hence, people love to follow the game as they get startstruck by these legends.

To recapitulate, the attractive earnings and inspiration received from famous cricketing personalities are two of the various causes of the mass reach and craziness of this game, over other national sports in the sub-continents. A person is not only attracted by the richness of the players but also, the inspiration given by a master of this sport. Additionally, in some countries cricket is not just a sport, but also a religion.

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Average: 8.1 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08630952381 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04926800396 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8400891435 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205270290755 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723968270155 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541070198397 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132725851126 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881571518258 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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