Some people believe that giving presents is an important way to show care to family and friends. Others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some, gifting is the primary method to display concern towards close ones while others believe in different ways to project their love and affection. I agree with the latter belief and therefore, in my opinion, being physically present is a better way to make someone feel important.
One one hand, being there in-person is believed to be a perfect way to demonstrate importance towards relatives and companions. The bonding of relations get stronger by staying around the people we care about, this makes them feel special and safe. For instance, a father can make his daughter feel more applauded and content at her annual day performance by attending it, as compared to presenting her a gift when she returns. Moreover, a personal display of affection is always preferred to materialistic tangibles.
On the other hand, there are also people who understand that sending presents is a more efficient way of caring. In other words, presents can make a person cheerful and can lift their mood by making them feel connected to their friends and relatives. For example, a birthday gift from a childhood friend can cause mixed feelings of happiness and missing someone.
To conclude, being there with someone is always better in contrast to gifting presents and as per my personal observations, it is best to join the celebrations with families as it makes them feel special. Consequently being there with people strengthens the relationships we share with them hence they feel more cared.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...present is a better way to make someone feel important. One one hand, being there...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
... way to make someone feel important. One one hand, being there in-person is believed...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...families as it makes them feel special. Consequently being there with people strengthens the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10931174089 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78521913371 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1090600226 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7272727273 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180106096475 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712500718344 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402613426704 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112121464436 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233998729009 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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