Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad, staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own experience and include relevant examples.
The majority of people prefer international travel for vacations because they relish local attractions and comfortable hotels. In my opinion, a trip to different countries is exciting also it is the best way to take a break from the usual routine. In the following paragraphs, two reasons to travel abroad; exploring diverse geography and discovering about new cultures, are presented.
Firstly, an international excursion gives an opportunity for exploring unseen locations. Irrespective of the beauty of the resident land a trip to a foreign country could take areas, seen in dreams. For instance, when I visited Malaysia with my colleagues, I enjoyed the beach view hotel for the first time which is not available in my landlocked country. Furthermore, It was thrilling and once in a lifetime experience to see skyscrapers for the first time. Therefore, visiting a new country can greatly satisfy one's wanderlust.
Secondly, learning about new cultures and demography is also a perk on an international vacation. Local markets and monuments are a great insight into a culture different from yours. For example, I enjoyed the local cuisine and traditional dance shows in Malaysia whereas visiting temples enlightened my spirit. Additionally, getting a chance to communicate and socialize with the local people helped me make new friends.
To conclude, taking a vacation to a different country and spending time at great hotels combined with local attraction visits can multiply the joy of your holidays. In other words, learning about the new culture, different geography and people could consequently be a pleasurable feeling to endure during a break from day to day life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...iting a new country can greatly satisfy ones wanderlust. Secondly, learning about...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05237536552 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1614961403 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127063211972 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041449865475 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373832139586 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796722276307 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196664116417 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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