Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy with everything organised and in the correct place What is your opinion about this

Essay topics:

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?

It is widely believed that cleanliness and organised place leads to better efficiency as it saves time. This essay aims to discuss the importance and effects of cleanliness in home and workplace before providing a personal opinion.

There are several benefits of keeping the home clean and organised. First and foremost, it prevents accidents which might lead to severe consequences, such as slipping on toys and injuring the spine. Secondly, the place remains germ-free thereby reducing the tendency to fall ill. Consequently, it is easier to track things while saving a lot of valuable time. Certain tasks can be completed in lesser time. For example, while cooking if the utensils and the spices are in their proper places then only time is spent on chopping the vegetables and cooking to food.

Moreover, being tidy and clutter free in the workplace has some of its own merits. If the work place is organised, it becomes easier to focus on work and not be distracted by the clutter. Therefore, it not only improves performance but also leads to promotions and better paychecks. For instance, it is often seen that when a person is not organised and are absent from work, locating documents or required items, at their workstation, becomes relatively tedious task. This causes loss of valuable productive time of the person looking for the document as well as hampers the leave of the other person as they will need to be contacted to retrieve the item.

To conclude, it is imperative that people should keep their home and workplace tidy and organised so that their productivity is increased and they live a better life.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98534798535 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68564374249 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3356618945 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149510033016 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503735956485 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541119975982 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106639918309 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508608017174 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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