You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Ms. Abott,
I am writing to request for your assistance regarding working in the head office. I have recently submitted a form expressing my interest to work at the headquarters for the upcoming six months, in Chicago.
I believe it is a great opportunity for me to acquire more knowledge as well as refine my existing skills. I would be able to impart the knowledge gained to the team here in Milan after I return.
While I am away, my work here will not suffer either. Although I have trained team members here who can deal with the tasks but my inputs are also needed in some scenarios. Hence, I have requested to allow me to allocate two hours daily from my working hours so that I can delegate the tasks to the team likewise. However, I have yet to receive further response.
Therefore, I would grateful if you could recommend me on working in the headquarters including the few hours required to mitigate tasks here.
Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e as well as refine my existing skills. I would be able to impart the knowledge g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63387978142 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63970061743 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7481702859 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236092897955 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927361527673 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811467090221 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136654733555 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910562657282 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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