Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether more importance should be given to tree plantation or to housing development to use the land available in urban areas. I agree that planting trees should be prioritised to make use of space in cities but new houses should be built in suburban areas instead.
Open spaces in metropolitans should be converted to greener areas because of the need to balance out the ecosystem and to reduce noise pollution. With regard to the former, trees produce oxygen and counteract the harmful effects of carbon emissions. As a result of this, the city population which is more exposed to pollution would breathe in the fresh air as well as relax and exercise in parks. As far as pollution is concerned, the greenery buffers the sound produced from various sources, such as vehicles' horns, machinery etc. and make cities a better place for people to live in as well as for their future counterparts.
Having said that, residential buildings should be built in the countryside rather than in cities to satisfy the need of the increased population. This is due to the fact that cities are already congested with modern infrastructure and using land for accommodation purpose would create more environmental problems. Another reason for dropping the idea of housebuilding in urban areas is because of the concern that it would encourage more urban movement and would lead to an unequal ratio of urban and rural dwellers. Therefore, it is more appropriate to use available urban land for growing more trees.
In conclusion, I agree that the use of derelict or open sites in planting trees should be of more value in urban areas, while residential construction should be planned in rural areas to make cities clean and green.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76791999923 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3861233912 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230603281025 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861891504682 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500407049328 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149847970914 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318867722745 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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