Some people opine that music can unite people from various age and cultural backgrounds. I completely agree with this view because of several reasons.
Firstly, music serves as universal language for people to communicate. This is because, although people do not understand each other's language, they can still communicate through music and melody. Whether it is happy or sad message, it can be conveyed through the melody and the rhythm of the music. For instance, a guy writes a song about love for his girlfriend in a language which is a native language for his girlfriend. Although she does not really understand the language, but she understands that the music is about her boyfriend's romantic feelings. Consequently, they both can communicate through music.
Secondly, music serves as common interest between people to befriend with each other, despite their cultural and age differences. This is because, everyone from any cultural and age background understand and loves music. People often start their friendships by liking the same music or same band, before finally talking about deeper conversation. For instance, there are many fan clubs of One Direction band who come from different nations and have members from different ages. Through these fan clubs, people are getting to know each other and are finally make friends with the member of fan clubs, despite their cultural and age differences.
In conclusion, I completely agree that music can unite people with different cultural and age background because music serves as universal language for people to communicate and music serves as common interest between people to befriend with each other, despite their cultural and age differences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... although people do not understand each others language, they can still communicate th...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...ting to know each other and are finally make friends with the member of fan clubs, d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35925925926 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68482756239 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5067431716 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307832582893 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122039421498 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932010034119 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24342866521 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894526804364 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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