Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music has always been a key distinguisher of culture, but many believe that it can also bridge the cultural gaps as well as age differences. This essay agrees with this statement because, firstly, no cultural barriers are applied to understanding messages embedded in music, and secondly, some youths prefer older creations.
Music does a lot to alleviate the cultural gap through the perspective of universal humanity. Even though one may not understand another culture, he can still understand the meaning and emotions of the music. One great example of this would be Bob Marley’s songs. Even though he lived in a small country called Jamaica, his songs have become influential all around the world, and with that, their culture. He expressed universal feelings of love, empathy and positivity against the national political corruption using his musical skills, and they have been translated across cultural divides.
The prime reason to believe in music as a unifier for different age groups, I think, is due to the fact that a considerable proportion of millennials being attached to the old music. The contribution to the music industry by previous generations are not only famous but invaluable. Beethoven’s pieces, for example, cannot be matched and they are valued by old and young generations alike. This becomes a common denominator between age groups to connect with each other. Moreover, live concerts will act as a platform to meet these people and share their experiences.
In conclusion, even though cultural and generational differences are significant in terms of music, those differences have made people with similar likings closer. It is especially important, at a time when the world appears to be more divided than ever, that we find common ground to build relationships upon.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88193607763 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9977040157 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223608030333 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705256102417 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588510129964 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136455922077 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397895811489 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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