Some people opine that music can unite people from various age and cultural backgrounds. I completely agree with this view because of several reasons.
Firstly, music serves as universal language for people to communicate. This is because, although people do not understand each other's language, they can still communicate through music and melody. Whether it is happy or sad message, it can be conveyed through the melody and the rhythm of the music. For instance, a guy writes a song about love for his girlfriend in a language which is a native language for his girlfriend. Although she does not really understand the language, but she understands that the music is about her boyfriend's romantic feelings. Consequently, they both can communicate through music.
Secondly, music serves as common interest between people to befriend with each other, despite their cultural and age differences. This is because, music is one of topics that can be discussed by people in all age and cultures. Starting by talking about music, they then finally able to become closer and develop deeper relationship. For instance, there are many fan clubs of One Direction band who come from different nations and have members from different ages. Through these fan clubs, people are getting to know each other and are finally make friends with the member of fan clubs, despite their cultural and age differences.
In conclusion, I completely agree that music can unite people with different cultural and age background because music serves as universal language for people to communicate and music serves as common interest between people to befriend with each other, despite their cultural and age differences.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 67
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 73
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Disucss both thes 73
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... although people do not understand each others language, they can still communicate th...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...ting to know each other and are finally make friends with the member of fan clubs, d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26102941176 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67903228652 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481617647059 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4346567494 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306573841216 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120806875397 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968057148377 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243782574378 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893387859555 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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