Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are opposing views that whether watching films on phones or tablets can replace watching films in the cinema. In this essay, i will analyze that before expressing my own view.
Many people think that it is not necessary for watching films in the cinema, because their phones or tablets can serve people to watch films like in the cinema. Nowadays, technology is really modern, people can look for any film they want on their telephones or tablets with good quality of the display. Additionally, using the devices for seeing movies is extremely convenient, because it is quite easy to have a movie. If their devices are connected to the internet, they can watch films immediately. By contrast, watching films in the cinema will not only waste time to get there, but you also have to pay for film tickets.
In the other hand, firstly, other people suppose that watching films on phones or tablets will not consume enough excitement such as space like in the cinema. Especially, the sound in the cinema is really attractive to viewers, they feel like real when they see a movie with a lively sound. Secondly, the fact is the display of phones or tablets is not as big as in the cinema, so they want to go to the cinema to have more feeling.
In summarize, i think that seeing movies in the cinema or on phones or tablets have different advantages, it depends on the demands of each person. For watching films without procedure as well as wasting much time, using phones or tablets is the best choice. If viewers want to watch films with the best sound and the best display. the cinema can satisfy them by supplying full devices for watching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67010309278 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37746552446 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470790378007 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1101420814 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272035945142 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11450118835 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674810326526 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196507644256 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240232260202 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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