Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreigncountry. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Modern lifestyle is changed very quickly and expanding the knowledge, gaining more information is essential nowadays. Therefore learning foreign languages and using it in various directions very important for all of us. Below I am going to cover the reasons, why we need to learn languages and why it is so important.
Firstly I would like to write about young generations. They are trying to achieve their aims and to be the professionals on their jobs with learning foreign language. They want to educate in contemporary well-known universities and with this to get next goals in their life. Learning new language open for them the opportunity doors to get these achievements. Besides it, knowing the alien language help them to communicate with other youth from all around the world and this also initiate them to collect numerous information about general things and even educate.
Secondly it is useful for old people also. Job requirements is modifying and who know the other languages have more chances to get job than who don’t know. Therefore if the people omit the learning new language, it can cause to stay jobless. Moreover, foreign language give them a chance to travel abroad and to gain various knowledge both in social life and in professional life. Human get more information during travelling and it helps him/her to be more educated and informative for the future.
Finally, to summarize all mentioned ideas I would like to emphasize the necessity of knowing foreign language both, for work and for social life. It will be privilege for each of us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...more information is essential nowadays. Therefore learning foreign languages and using it...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... Secondly it is useful for old people also. Job requirements is modifying and who ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...uages have more chances to get job than who don't know. Therefore if the peopl...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...es to get job than who don't know. Therefore if the people omit the learning new lan...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: staying
...the learning new language, it can cause to stay jobless. Moreover, foreign language giv...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.177700348432 0.247107183377 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.19512195122 0.155533422707 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114982578397 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0487804878049 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0766550522648 0.0437548338989 175% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0975609756098 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0487804878049 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77157452419 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0592334494774 0.0326793684256 181% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0731707317073 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01393728223 0.021408717616 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01393728223 0.011925033212 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1584.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06896551724 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337164750958 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287356321839 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210727969349 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149425287356 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77157452419 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 59.3206250349 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4033001952 49.517814964 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 46.1356321839 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.01086956522 1.69124875643 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364439028891 0.332605444948 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0949836202339 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599592964835 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526296389243 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137183071769 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142359926664 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703756572366 0.0742795772207 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316249756715 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0766978044002 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243435324045 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338233258682 0.058150111329 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.