Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp

Learning new languages is the biggest asset for people. It is often argued that people seeking foreign language is to work and travel in a foreign country. From my prescriptive public by practicing speaking foreign language adds a huge advantage not only in work and travel but in other corners too. Learning fresh language helps people in widening their knowledge and prosperity.
Society can be benefited in many ways by pursing foreign languages. Public have a chance to learn culture of other communities easily by knowing their languages. For instance, citizens in our country learn English, Spanish, Germany languages which helps them to experiments culture in these languages.one can also enhance his knowledge while seeking fresh accent. For example, one can learn unknown theories which are written in other than his own language.
Moreover, people can build their confidence by knowing unfamiliar language.one can communicate with ease with other language people. And able to spend time with citizens of different culture and nativity. A person can apply his knowledge effectively at different areas by using the different languages. One can do researches in different parts of the world by learning universal language. Recent studies on people knowledge shown that the people who speaks multi languages are more successful that the people speak a single language.
In conclusion, practicing foreign languages makes people wise not only in work people wise not only in work and travel but other corners also. Humans can enhance their skills and capabilities with learning new languages.

Votes
Average: 3.6 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ly in work and travel but other corners also. Humans can enhance their skills and ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71046564265 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9253067079 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300713886107 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113272072271 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888975207048 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218222479292 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099871021499 0.056905535591 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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