Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers. Would the advantages of

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Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

People in these are anticipated to eat various types of dishes. Some individuals believe that imported food has a detrimental effect on our economy and culture and it would be better if people consume local production. This essay provides empirical evidence that supports that advantages of imported provision out weight the disadvantages.

To embark on the positive side, transporting the food miles enhance the choice by the consumers in section food from a bunch of varieties. In support of the public in modern days is eager to taste other culture’s food and enjoy their feast. Moreover, many types of fruits and vegetables can be grown in cooler regions which can be transported to other regions and kiwi is another fruit yield in New Zealand mostly, by transporting many can enjoy having these kinds of seasonal fruits. Another significant advantage is the trading among the regions expands and improves the relation and economy of the regions. Most importantly the huge employment comes into the light like for farmers, dealers, drivers for the transport system and more daily labors too.

On the other hand, importing food prices could be high by including transportation fairs and taxes which cannot be sustained by middle-class people. By overwhelming transportation, the climatic conditions may affect and increase the pollution from exhausted fumes.

To conclude, it is clear that importing food has many more benefits than drawbacks. Exporting and importing food are advantages in a plethora of ways on the whole.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, on the whole, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34016393443 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90257405988 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.77257345 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307809674439 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103804570462 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970687278392 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169955115883 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927154801625 0.056905535591 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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