Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn howto occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Every concerned parent wants what's best for their child. While there are some who believe the group oriented tasks as a best tool to engage their child in the leisure time. Others, on the other hand, think that a child should choose what to do on his/ her own. But directing a child in a particular group activity, in my perspective, is not a healthy option.
To look at the option of engaging children to participate in group tasks, many positive outcomes are expected. Starting with the development of better teamwork potential among children along with the enhancement of handling team mates coupled with a particular task efficiently. Also, performing in a group teaches every individual to be confident in expressing their views in front of their group members and efficiently discussing it. It also teaches them to be open to all sorts of criticism as it helps in gaining experience and learning from their own mistakes.
On the contrary, some people are of the opinion that parents should not encourage a child to go in a particular direction, rather they should let their children decide on their own on how to occupy or spend their free time. They think that it helps a child to be decisive and to develop an interest of their own rather than directing them towards a particular thing. It also helps children to take responsibility for their actions and be independent.
If I talk about myself, I am more opinionated towards the idea of encouraging a child to choose what is best for them on their own and decide what to do in what they more interested in. I, myself, am a parent, and I would never force my child into doing what he would not like. In fact my mantra is; "Do what you like, but the condition is to excel it".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, in fact, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67313915858 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65471210502 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7957382266 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312686197502 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113974172251 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987985042274 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194487872061 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102437716797 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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