A wise person once said, Success is no accident. Every one of us wants to know the key to success and be successful in whatever we do. While a lot of people believe it is the talent which help us reach heights, I believe we need many other aspects to taste success.
Like a famous song in my country goes, Success is a mixture of talent, hard work, persistence and a little bit of luck. It is just the tip of the iceberg which we see able on the surface, underneath the tip lies the power pack of the above said four ingredients.
Firstly, Talent, it is god given gift to a given person. We all know and agree that each one of us have a specific talent’s and we all must polish our gifts for them to shine. Here is where, I strongly believe that hard work comes into place. Without putting in efforts no one can excel in anything just because we are gifted. We all need to dedicate time and effort in improving one self.
Next, I would say is persistence, even with the above two components in place, working on something continuously without being pessimistic will help us achieve our dreams. Lastly but not the least, a little bit of luck I also required to become successful, we all agree that a few times being in a specific place and at a specific time would have made a drastic change in our lives.
To sum all up, I believe that key to success is a package of all the above qualities. Talent or hard work alone cannot make a person successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...of talent, hard work, persistence and a little bit of luck. It is just the tip of the iceb...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...our dreams. Lastly but not the least, a little bit of luck I also required to become succe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35636363636 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45204182079 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.548635965 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237027927775 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873479717361 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736895225714 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140569726372 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588402141045 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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