For most of their lives, some people has stayed at their hometowns. There are several reasons of this phenomenon. Besides, Living for life in the place one's born brings both advantages and disadavantages.
To begin with, people's reason of staying may vary. First, the old people for instance. When they were young, due to the poor transportation, they could not have the opportunities to go out of ther communities for living. Besides, the cultural aspect may hold them staying. In China, people's mind have been formed for thousands of years that do not go out for living, the life that staying at home and plating crops with family is the best. Second, by the development of the society, people may get chances to go out for working, while they have to take care of their parents with health issues at home. In this case, they choose to work at their hometown, looking after their parents. Third, it is challenging for people to live out of their hometown. On one hand, it is the salary could not be assured by them. On the other hand, they would have to pruchase a house or flat to live, which is also another expensive consumption. At last, some people could get better work locally rather than they do outside. Thus, they have to make a living on the job, staying at hometown is their single choice.
When these people enjoying the benefits from staying at hometown, there are also some good merits they lost. For one thing, living in a familiar community is quite easier than that living in a strange place. Especially in the place where individual born. One could easily get the information about every aspect of lives. For another thing, they lost the chance to explore a new place with differeny culture. Thus, their life experience is limited to the commnity lived from their childhood.
In all, with the different reasons to stay at hometown, people have lived there for life, tasting the bitterness and sweetness of lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, may, second, so, third, thus, while, another thing, for instance, for another thing, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77151335312 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4278474058 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525222551929 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2089037495 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323900774733 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10748646655 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572277348156 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231111405904 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672392192486 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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