Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is the duty of universities to give quality education to students and enable them to be successful in life. Some people opine that all universities should provide courses related to science and technology that has a high scope of getting jobs. While others argue that universities should also provide subjects such as art, commerce etc. I completely agree with the latter argument that universities should teach all subjects and should not restrict to only certain kinds of subjects.
To begin with, universities need to consider students career before providing a certain course.
Due to globalization, world will be focused on science and technology.Hence there will be a grater demand for jobs in these fields.Teaching only those kind of subjects will help more students to get job faster.
For instance,software industries are booming in india.Hence it offers more job oppertunity than any other
domain.As a result companies are recruting thousands of students from universities related to science and technogies such as engineering.From these perspective it seems quite logical for universities to teach only science related subjects.
On the other hand,students should be allowed to follow their passion in life.This is because each induvidual is unique and gifted with certain talents.For example,Shah Ruch Khan,aveteran actor could achieve hugh success in Indian movie industry only because he was able to study in Indian School Of Drama.If all universities were to teach only job oriented subjects, we would have missed a great talented person like him. Also for a country to prospare,it needs individuals from all walks of lives.This would not be possible if all universities teach only a certain set of subjects.
To conclude, universities have to consider the pros and cons of any policy adopted including whether the students are free to pick their subjects or not. Personally, I believe that letting university students prefer their subjects have far more benefits and seem more logical in a broader sense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40566037736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.101153527 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.124667352 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.272727273 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347361174519 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132996999303 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541282210762 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146308822245 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919897168448 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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