Some people believe that art is also an important subject for school children other than academics whilst others argue that it is a waste of time. In my opinion, I completely agree that art is an essential subject, however this essay will shed some light on both the view.
In one hand, the characteristics of art should be registered in children since their childhood. So the children could spend time equally for both the academics as well as activities like art. Some parents think that though their children does not possess well in the academics, they could succeed in arts and hence that should be made as an essential subject in their syllabus. For example, there is a famous artist in Chennai named Latha mani Rajkumar who run art classes for all age people. But she is quite down in her academics and didn't posses well. This shows that in spite of being dumb in academics, she became famous in her hometown through other activities.
On the other hand, people believe that art could be defined only as a hobby and not as a subject because it leads to wastage of the student's precious time. Also, students lack concentration in their academics due to other activities. As mentioned in the above example, since she is not good in her academics, she put her daughters in tuition for subjects, also she wanted them to score well in their academics than arts.
To conclude, art is a very good subject for school children, since it could be a chance for them to succeed in arts if they to fail to in academics. However, the decisions should be made earlier by the parents so that it does not affect their children's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65051903114 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47815131523 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498269896194 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1735096875 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299789655714 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112470003523 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971955387438 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208956026427 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115300381532 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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