Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Art play crucial role in human life for further development and it is counted in significant part of all culture in all over the world. In such a scenario, today the topic argument that, art is important subject for children or it is wastage of time? Now, I am going to examine both points of view and shape up my opinion by end.
On the one side argument, there are group of people believe that, art is an essential subject for children, but, how it is beneficial for them? There are number of answers related to this statement. First of all, art is an single subject, which is also a good source of entertain to us and mostly the students easily create their interest in art. Moreover, due to art subject, they will diminish their stress after having serious classes, such as; physics, chemistry and mathematics etc. Undoubtedly, this subject will create more fun classes as well as it is good way to express our feelings and emotions through painting and drawing. Besides, the authority should involve this subject into a school curriculum.
On the other side, opponents of art subject point out that, art subject is totally wastage of time. It will be better, if pupils focus on other subjects like as; science and related to technology subjects. Infact, art is not only one of a mandatory subject included in national examination compared to other subjects. Furthermore, mostly the people think that future is not secure in the art sector. So that, they mostly focus on other compulsory subjects and it is noticeable that art is an additional subject for students.
To sum up, with the discuss of both sides, I believe that authority should included art in optional subject, if not then the popularity of art will be totally vanish in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7737704918 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5578477919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9622005738 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330734861321 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110531564531 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743042304278 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187321174879 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574479396228 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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