Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowdays, government through out the world grappling with the problems like rising unemployment and growing threats of terrorism. Poverty is still a major issue in many countries like as; Asia, Africa and India. But, today the topic asserts that who is the more responsible for healthy lifestyle government or individuals? Now, I am going to examine some possible points with the following paragraph and shape up my opinion by the end.
Take one side argument, group of people believe that government is responsible for healthy lifestyle but how? There are number of answers related to this topic. First of all, in my country every facilities are available, but everything is very expensive. Every person cannot afford these expensive things easily. So that, government should provide free medical treatments for the public as well as need to open new health centre for the individuals, which is effective way to improve our healthy lifestyle. Take for instance, recent research suggests that in the Europe countries government provide all kind of facilities to the individuals at a cheapest price like as; gym, medical facilities and healthy food etc. So that, there the standard of living is very good.
On the other side, opponents of this argument numbers of people believe that individuals are responsible for healthy lifestyle. It is true, in this modernisation era every person have a hectic lifestyle. But, they have to need to do little exercise to stay our body fit and fine. Apart from that, in these days youngsters are preferred to the western culture, they like to eat adulteration food rather than the home made food like as; burger, pizza, so on. A one good illustration is organic farming is defined as farmers need to grow crops with the natural sediments, which give them higher profit as well as better results for our health. Furthermore, environment is polluted day by day by individuals, they are very careless. For example, most of people using their personal vehicle for travelling. So that, pollution is rising continously and it create bad impacts on living organisms.
Tu sum up, after discuss both sides of views decide that both are responsible for protection of human health. However, they can improve it, if they co-operate with each other and solve this problem easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: throughout
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09762532982 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70996934209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583113456464 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.221801577 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0476190476 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15408673727 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398345796471 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481407486599 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952223675316 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265500997412 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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